Agenda: -bellwork -reflection questions -peer feedback and ...

Agenda: -bellwork -reflection questions -peer feedback and ...

AGENDA -B e l l w o r k Pa p e r S e l f Re v i e w f o r content - Pe e r Re v i e w - Re v i s i n g G o a l s - H W: T h i n k a b o u t d r a ft c h a n g e s Self analyze essay for ideas, content, organization, voice, word choice, strong verbs. Identify strong and weak areas. Pee r an a ly ze es sa y f or ide as , c on te n t, organization, voice, word choice, strong verbs. Identify strong and weak areas. 8 Nov. A writer only begins a book. A reader finishes it. - Samuel Johnson BellworkSelf Analyze 11/8/12

On the last page of your essay, write what you were trying to say with this essay. One direct statement of purpose is all you need. (this should sound somewhat like your thesis) On the last page, write specific things you want help with. On the Yellow sheet, complete the whole column for Authors Comments Comment on these rows: ideas & content; organization; voice; word choice Use language from the descriptions If appropriate, mention particular parts from your essay On the side of the white page, write at least one specific

question for your editors RevisingWhat to focus on Revising vs. Editing Re+visionRevision means to see again with new eyes Focus on Revis e Focus on Internal Structure Ideas, content, organization, word choice, strong verbs, voice,

Edit Focus on External Sheen Grammar, punctuation, sentence structure, eliminating weak verbs and weak words. Today we focus on REVISINGInternal Structure Peer Revising Trade papers and yellow sheets. Read the question the author wrote on the bottom of the page, and read what they say their purpose is on the last page of their essay

Read their paper through once, writing all over the essay (dont fill in the yellow sheet yet) Ask questions at parts you dont understand Write suggestions for improvement Identify parts you like or think are strong Tell them whether or not they achieved their purpose as stated on the last page of their essay Go back to the yellow sheet. Write your name in the Editors Comments Column & using specific language from the descriptions, give them feedback in each category. Skim over their essay as you need to in order to cite specific areas in your comments. Answer their question at the bottom of the page. Reflection

On the back of your essay, consider the following and write your responses down: Did your editor think you achieved your purpose? Why or why not? What are you going to do to improve your weaker areas? What, if anything, do you think you still need help on? What questions do you have before you turn this in on Monday?

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